The Story

Several West Point graduates, including Grant and Sherman, navigate a life of duty and honor from the US expansion into California to the Mexican War and finally on the battlefields of the Civil War, where colleagues and sometimes, friends and family, find themselves on opposing sides.

What I like about this book

I am not a history scholar, so I can’t vouch for the complete historical accuracy of the book (although it rings true for me). However, as a reader of history, I enjoyed many of the military leaders of the day coming to life. The author vividly describes complex battlefields without leaving the reader lost in the woods. And I really appreciated the very human recognition by most of the characters that war is a bloody, wasteful enterprise. A great summertime read.

Things that gave me pause

Many of the characters in the novel have a way of accidentally coming across each other in the wilderness, on chaotic battlefields and in towns. As one who has had trouble finding my spouse in a shopping mall, I had to suspend my disbelief. However, the many encounters enabled the characters to engage each other on a broad and colorful canvas of history. Fair tradeoff.

Sol LeWitt American, born 1928 Four-Sided Pyramid, 1999

Sol LeWitt

American, born 1928

Four-Sided Pyramid, 1999

I visited Washington DC last week and, as usual, took the opportunity to visit the Mall and some of my favorite museums: The American History Museum, Air and Space Museum, Museum of Art and a stroll through the Museum of Art Sculpture Garden. A mom with her six year old walked a few paces behind me.
“Mom, I want to climb that mountain.” I assumed he referred to the pyramid sculpture in front of us.
“No, you can’t climb that.”
“Why not?”
“Its sculpture. Its a piece of art called sculpture. You don’t climb on sculpture.”
The boy walked alongside his mother silently for a few steps, then said, “It doesn’t look like skupper to me.”

As a writer and a reader I’ve come across novels that I know raise the art form, true sculpture. And like you, I’ve also read twenty or thirty pages into a book and had the same feeling that little boy had, “It doesn’t look like skupper to me.” So who gets to decide what is art and what is not?

Reviewers come to mind as guardians of sculpture vs. skupper. They give us a detailed and hopefully thoughtful perspective on a work. I often find future reads by checking out reviews in the NY Times and other publications. However, I can’t say the reviewers always hit their mark for me. Sometimes the recommended read just doesn’t resonate for me. Nothing against the author, more a statement of who I am and my interests and passions.

Contests — Many writers put their work in contests, not so much for the thrill of competition, but more to get some objective feedback. I haven’t won one of these contest yet, though I’ve been a finalist. And I have to admit that the external recognition “oh, maybe my writing isn’t crap after all” provides some energy for the continuing journey.

Market Share — In cold, hard business terms, market share should be a good sign of a successful writer — right? I’d say significant market share is the sign of a writer successful in the business. Quality does not always sell, whether we’re talking about novels, music, power tools, cars or beer. Sometimes folks just want a cold one and don’t care about the craft of beer making. And sometimes folks just want a simple, predictable story.

Agents & Publishers — The Holy Grail for many of us. I’ve heard many times, “If only I had an agent.” We line up, anxiously awaiting a five minute conversation with these professionals hoping to sell them on our book. If an agent wants to represent me, then my writing must be pretty decent, right?  But what do the thousands of writers, many of them creating good work, tell themselves if they don’t have a publishing deal?

Critique Groups — I have a love/hate relationship with my critique group. We have committed to speaking the truth to each other, but sometimes, after I’ve poured my life into a few pages of text, I really don’t want to hear the truth, unless its something like, “This is the finest piece of writing I’ve ever had the good fortune to read.” How often do you think that happens? Right — never. A scene can always be improved, tightened, the conflict made more intense, the characters more developed. Which is why writers join together to critique each other’s work. If you’re a writer and you’re not in a critique group, I’d urge you to find one. You will, like me, love them some days and hate them on others, but you will always be challenged to raise your craft from skupper to sculpture.

You, the writer — Looking over the list above, the one key data point of feedback missing that determines whether my writing lives up to my standard of art is me. While all the other data points out there combined give us a sense for the validity of our work and the quality of our craft, the artist is the only one who decides if its sculpture or skupper. We’re all probably familiar with artists who created a body of work during their lifetimes only to be recognized for their art after death. Phillip Dick comes immediately to mind. A writer who produced many stories in his day, but only recognized for his unique creativity after death as his stories became published and turned into screenplays for movies like Blade Runner.

I believe that if I start to think the purpose of my writing is to be famous, wealthy, read my millions and a guest on Opra, then I will have lost focus on my art. All I can do as a writer is to create the best work I can from my unique voice and perspective. Yes, I want to take in all the feedback from all of those external sources listed above because I want to continually improve my craft. But the source of recognition, of affirmation that I am an artist and that my work has value and meaning, comes from within.

I’d love to hear from you. What’s your perspective on determining the art of your work?

Ah, Time Travel!  That magical  staple of science fiction.  As I ponder my own path through the science fiction landscape, one recurring plot device would have to be time travel.  The following is a list of the formative time travel plots, not comprehensive at all and not necessarily in order of quality, but more chronologically that I encountered growing up.


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I think my earliest encounter with anything resembling time travel had to be Dicken’s “A Christmas Carol” and of course, I am not referring to the novel, but the 1962 Mr. Magoo version that haunted the television airwaves in the early sixties.  Being my first exposure to Dicken’s work, Mr. Magoo still feels like the authoritative version of the story to me.  Watching Ebeneezer Scrooge break the bonds of the present to travel back to Christmas past, present and future truly messed with my young developing mind.  Of course we could argue whether Eb visited his Chrismas Past in a vision, but I like to think the Ghost of Christmas Past actually transported him there.
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I can still remember my formative experience of the time travel paradigm seeing “Time Machine,” the 1960 flick based on H.G. Wells book of the same title.  Do you remember that really cool time machine that looked a bit like Santa Claus and the Elves doing a bit of mescaline?
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The first TV show I can remember that revolved around time travel has to be “Time Tunnel.”  I always liked the cool spiraling infinity visual effect used to “transport” James Darren repeatedly into the time-space continuum.
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“Bewitched.”  True confession.  As a boy, and I don’t think I was alone in this, I was madly in love with Elizabeth Montgomery.  What a babe! (Hey, it’s the 60’s and I’m a little kid, so I think I can be a little anachronistically sexist.)  She had a way with her cute little nose and with time, conjuring up Benjamin Franklin, Sigmund Freud and Leonardo DaVinci, to name only a few.  And I seem to recall she visited Salem during a rather awkward moment  for witches during the 1600’s in that part of the world.

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Certainly I’ve got to add in the Star Trek episode, “Tomorrow Is Yesterday” when USAF Captain Christopher finds himself on the USS Enterprise after the star ship, in attempting to break the grasp of a black star, sent itself plummeting through time and space to be conveniently in the vicinity of planet Earth in 1969.  The moral here is not to use a tractor beam from a Starfleet vessel on a 1960’s vintage USAF fighter.  Duh!

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“Back to the Future.”  The big plot advance for this cinematic franchise was the substitution of a DeLorean for that old Model A of a contraption in The Time Machine.   I understand the DeLorean is a much better time machine than sportscar.

So what are your formative time travel plots?   Just to prime the pump, here are a few more come to mind as memorable and more recent additions to the time travel lexicon:

Movies

  • Time Bandits
  • The Terminator flicks
  • Bill and Ted’s Excellent Adventure
  • 12 Monkeys

TV

  • Dr. Who
  • Torchwood
  • Lost
  • Journeyman
  • Life on Mars

I have tossed the idea of a blog around for awhile — okay, at least a year. I’ve been hesitant to pull the trigger because I look out in the ‘webiverse’ and see thousands and thousands of blogs. So the real question has been, if I’m going to blog, what exactly will I blog about. I thought of a blog about writing. Many of my compatriots who live in the world of publish, about to be published, hoping to one day be published post blogs regularly. There’s a wealth of great blogs about writing, publishing, social networking and even how to blog your blog.

Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy

I don’t have any empirical evidence to support this claim, but I’m sure many writers have had the experience of walking into a large library or a big box bookstore to find themselves surrounded by thousands upon thousands of novels. My most recent experience occurred in a Barnes and Noble here in Seattle, doing some market research. I’ve got a humorous sci-fi novel in the can and wanted to know where on the shelves I’d find that genre and the writers represented on that shelf. Among the many, Douglas Adams had not simply a shelve, but more of a literary shrine on an eye level shelf. Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy, numerous other titles, dictionaries, compendiums, boxed sets and glossaries loaded the shelf. Standing at the Adams altar I noticed that the store had neglected to set up votive candles and then I turned to see, as theologians like to say, a cloud of witnesses. Hundreds, thousands of authors, known and unknown, commercial successes and flashes in the pan, literary greats and not so much, encompassing me on all sides.

I turned to them, shouting, “Who am I to write a novel? How on earth can I compete not only with my contemporaries, but every Tom, Dick and Jane who has lifted a pen, tapped on a typewriter or a flipped open a laptop since Beowulf?”

The answer is long and complicated. Which leads me to the purpose of this blog. If I were going to give the blog a title it would be something like, “Just Who the Hell Do You Think You Are?” How do any of us stand in this moment and create? What does it mean to be creative? Do I have to make money at my art to be successful? Has everything already been done and if so, why bother? Is there room for anything short of the Great American Novel? Do I have to be the literary equivalent of the next American Idol, Top Chef, or at least the NYTimes Book Review?

So that’s my plan. Ponder the meaning of writing and creating, sharing book reviews of books I enjoy and tossing in the occasional story about food, the world and life. Should be fun. Hope you’ll come along for the ride.